Sunday, 14 September 2014

Feedback - Miss Spencer

Your prelim task includes many of the elements I asked you to , and I can see you have already got some editing skills. Your analysis is good, and you have outlined elements like the 180 degree rule, in order to improve I would like you to also comment on how you incorporated some of these elements, and also say what would happen if rules like these were broken.

THanks




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