Research and Planning - 9
Planning and research evidence is partially incomplete.
There is proficient work on research into similar products, and basic work into
potential target audiences. There appears to be no work on the organisation of
actors and locations etc, and no storyboard, script, shot lists etc.
presentation is good, but time management is not.
Main Task – 34
Overall there were successful sequences created, a
controlled use of the camera is apparent and there is a reasonable variety of
shots. Also the sound was built up for effect, and the sound clearly shows a
proficient use of layers of found and created sound. The titles follow
conventions and there is a good use of suitable fonts. The editing is
proficient, although some of the cuts are a little too quick, reflecting the
problems had when filming of turning the camera off too quickly. However there
is limited action (long opening shots of trains and location) with nothing
specifically relating to the narrative. There is not enough substance to the
opening which would have benefited from much more being filmed at each location
to really convey meaning to the viewer.
I'm content with these marks, as I cannot improve my main task marks I'm going to work really hard on my research and planning to bring my marks up.
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