First Cut - Feed Back

I'm content with the first cut of our film, I feel as if we need to add some more dialogue other than constantly calling for 'Max'. We're going to add a part to the film when I'm on the phone and add a second end to the phone call. We also need to make sure all sound levels are equal so there are no irrelevant background sounds. When we come to adding sound effects we're going to add some dramatic pieces of music to show the tension of the scene, and to show that I'm being watched.